Grammar & Writing Lesson Plan

    Help students develop strong academic writing skills through targeted grammar instruction and systematic self-editing practices.

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    Published: January 13, 2026

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    Download or print the complete lesson plan for classroom use, or get just the student handouts including Error Hunt passages, self-editing checklist, tone transformation worksheet, and sentence variety exercises.

    Lesson Overview

    Duration

    70-85 minutes

    Grade Level

    7-12 / College

    Focus

    Writing Excellence

    This lesson builds grammar and academic writing skills through hands-on practice. Students learn to identify their personal error patterns, develop systematic self-editing habits, and use grammar tools as learning aids—not just spell-checkers.

    Learning Objectives

    Identify and correct common grammatical errors in academic writing
    Vary sentence structure to improve readability and engagement
    Apply academic tone and style conventions appropriately
    Use grammar tools effectively as learning aids, not just correction tools
    Self-edit writing systematically before submission

    Before Class: Preparation Checklist

    Materials to Print

    Error Hunt Practice Passages (1 per student - 3 passages)
    Self-Editing Checklist (1 per student)
    Academic Tone Transformation worksheet (1 per student)
    Sentence Variety Exercises (1 per student)
    Sample student writing with common errors (anonymized)

    Technology Setup

    Bookmark Grammar Check tool for live demo
    Prepare before/after writing samples for projection
    Optional: Record yourself modeling self-editing process
    Test projector/screen for displaying examples

    Focus Areas

    Sentence Structure

    Common issues:

    Run-on sentences
    Fragments
    Comma splices
    Lack of variety

    Teaching tip: Teach students to read aloud—awkward sentences often reveal themselves when spoken

    Academic Tone

    Common issues:

    Informal language
    First person overuse
    Contractions
    Vague pronouns

    Teaching tip: Show before/after examples of the same idea in casual vs. academic register

    Clarity & Precision

    Common issues:

    Wordiness
    Passive voice overuse
    Ambiguous references
    Jargon without definition

    Teaching tip: Challenge students: 'Can you say this in fewer words without losing meaning?'

    Materials & Tools

    Classroom Materials

    • Error Hunt Practice Passages (3 levels)

    • Self-Editing Checklist (two-pass system)

    • Academic Tone Transformation worksheet

    • Sentence Variety Exercises

    • Before/after example slides

    Activity Sequence

    1
    Error Hunt Challenge
    20 min

    Students become 'professional editors' hunting for errors in practice passages, scoring their finds

    2
    Self-Editing Workshop
    20 min

    Apply the two-pass editing system (Structure first, Polish second) to own writing

    3
    Academic Tone Transformation
    20 min

    Transform casual writing into academic register while maintaining core meaning

    4
    Sentence Variety Lab
    20 min

    Combine choppy sentences and vary structures for improved rhythm and flow

    Detailed Activity Instructions

    Activity 1: Error Hunt Challenge

    20 min
    Say:

    "Professional editors get paid good money to find mistakes in writing. Today, you're going to become professional editors. Your job is to hunt down every error hiding in these passages. The more you find, the better editor you become."

    1

    Distribute Error Hunt Passages

    Hand out the three practice passages. Each has 10 embedded errors of different types.
    2

    Model the Process

    Project Passage A and demonstrate finding the first 2-3 errors, thinking aloud about what's wrong and how to fix it.
    3

    Individual Work

    Give students 10-12 minutes to hunt for errors independently. Remind them to circle errors AND write the correction.
    4

    Reveal and Discuss

    Go through each passage, revealing errors. Students score themselves (1 point per error found AND correctly fixed).
    Teaching Tip

    Make it competitive without shaming—celebrate "sharp-eyed editors" who find tricky errors, but emphasize that we all make these mistakes (that's why professional editors exist!).

    Activity 2: Self-Editing Workshop

    20 min
    Say:

    "Now you're going to edit YOUR OWN writing using a professional editing system. Real editors don't try to fix everything at once—they do multiple passes, each focusing on different things. We call this the two-pass system."

    1

    Introduce Two-Pass System

    Explain: First Pass = Structure (organization, sentence types, flow). Second Pass = Polish (tone, word choice, grammar details).
    2

    Model First Pass

    Using a sample paragraph, demonstrate checking for structure issues while deliberately ignoring spelling/punctuation.
    3

    Students Apply Checklist

    Students use the Self-Editing Checklist on a recent piece of their own writing. First pass only, then second pass.
    4

    Identify Personal Patterns

    Students complete the "Personal Error Pattern Tracker" section, noting their most common error type.
    Trying to Fix Everything at Once

    Students often read once and try to catch all errors. This leads to missing things. Enforce separate passes: "Put your pencil down after pass one. Shake out your hands. Now we're switching gears to pass two."

    Activity 3: Academic Tone Transformation

    20 min
    Say:

    "There's nothing wrong with casual language—we use it all the time. But academic writing has its own register, like a different language for a different purpose. Today we're learning to code-switch between casual and academic."

    1

    Show Before/After Examples

    Display 2-3 example transformations. Ask students what specifically changed (vocabulary, structure, specificity, removed "you").
    2

    Identify the Patterns

    Create a class list: What makes writing sound academic? (specific vocabulary, no contractions, hedging language, evidence-based claims)
    3

    Practice Transformations

    Students work through the transformation exercises on their handout, converting casual sentences to academic register.
    4

    Share and Compare

    Partners compare transformations. Are there multiple "right" ways to make something academic?
    Teaching Tip

    Emphasize that academic doesn't mean robotic. Students can still have voice—it's about appropriate register, not erasing personality. Show examples of engaging academic writing.

    Activity 4: Sentence Variety Lab

    20 min
    Say:

    "Listen to this: 'The study was important. It tested memory. The participants were students.' Does that sound choppy? Now listen: 'This important study tested memory among student participants.' Same information, but it flows. That's the power of sentence variety."

    1

    Diagnose Choppy Writing

    Read the problem paragraph aloud. Ask: What's wrong? (All short sentences, same structure, repetitive starts)
    2

    Demonstrate Combining Techniques

    Show how to combine sentences using coordination, subordination, and participial phrases. Model 2-3 examples.
    3

    Students Practice

    Work through Sentence Variety Exercises handout. Combine choppy sentences and vary sentence openers.
    4

    Read Aloud Test

    Partners read each other's combined paragraphs aloud. Does it flow? Does it sound natural?
    Making Sentences Too Long

    When combining, students sometimes create run-ons. Remind them: "Combine for variety, not for length. A well-placed short sentence can be powerful."

    Student Handout: Error Hunt Practice Passages

    Error Hunt Practice Passages

    Find and correct the errors in each passage. Circle the error and write the correction above it.

    Passage A
    The Technology Debate (10 errors)

    The debate over technology in schools have become increasingly heated in recent years, some educators believe screens are essential for modern learning. Others argue that their harmful to student development. Research on this topic show mixed results many studies finding both benefits and drawbacks.

    Students who use digital tools alot tend to develop strong technical skills. However they may struggle with focus and deep reading. One teacher noted that "students today have shorter attention spans then students did ten years ago".

    The solution is'nt to ban technology completely. Instead, schools should find a balance between digital and traditional learning method's.

    Errors found:
    /10

    Passage B
    Climate Research Summary (10 errors)

    According to recent studies, global temperatures has risen significantly over the past century. Researchers examining ice cores, tree rings, and other data, they have found clear evidence of this warming trend. The data shows that human activities is a major contributing factor.

    Rising with the temperature, scientists have observed sea levels increasing at alarming rates. This effects coastal communities around the world; many are already experiencing flooding. The situation requires immediate attention and action.

    While some argue we should wait for more research but most experts agree that delay is dangerous. Taking steps now to reduce emissions, it will help protect future generations.

    Errors found:
    /10

    Passage C
    Literary Analysis Excerpt (10 errors)

    In the novel, the author uses symbolism to convey deeper meanings about society. The green light is representative of Gatsby's hopes and dreams. It symbolizes the american dream and the things that he wants to achieve. Gatsby's pursuit of it shows how people chase after things that are unattainable.

    The eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg is another important symbol. They are representative of the eyes of God watching over the valley. Which suggests moral judgement. Fitzgerald makes utilization of this image to critique 1920s society.

    Basically these symbols work together to create a critique of materialism and moral decay. The fact that the characters can't escape the watchful eyes show that their actions have consequences.

    Errors found:
    /10

    Scoring:

    Passage A: ___ /10
    Passage B: ___ /10
    Passage C: ___ /10
    Total: ___ /30

    Student Handout: Self-Editing Checklist

    Self-Editing Checklist

    Use this two-pass system to systematically edit your writing before submission.

    FIRST PASS
    Structure (Read Silently)

    Each paragraph has ONE clear main idea
    Topic sentences appear at the beginning of paragraphs
    Transitions connect ideas between sentences
    Transitions connect ideas between paragraphs
    No sentence fragments (missing subject or verb)
    No run-on sentences (two complete thoughts without proper connection)
    No comma splices (two complete thoughts joined only by comma)
    Sentences vary in length (mix of short, medium, long)
    Sentences vary in structure (simple, compound, complex)

    SECOND PASS
    Polish (Read Aloud)

    Academic tone maintained (no slang, contractions, or casual phrases)
    Removed unnecessary words (very, really, basically, actually)
    Subject-verb agreement verified
    Pronoun references are clear (reader knows what "it" or "they" refers to)
    Verb tenses are consistent
    Punctuation checked (especially commas and apostrophes)
    Homophones verified (their/there/they're, its/it's, your/you're)

    FINAL CHECK

    Read entire paper backwards (sentence by sentence) for typos
    Checked formatting requirements
    Verified citations are complete

    Personal Error Pattern Tracker

    My most common error type

    Sentence I fixed today:

    One thing I'll watch for next time

    Student Handout: Academic Tone Transformation

    Academic Tone Transformation

    Learn to transform casual writing into academic register while maintaining your core message.

    Example Transformations

    Example 1

    CASUAL

    "A lot of people think social media is bad for teens."

    ACADEMIC

    "Research suggests social media may have adverse effects on adolescent mental health."

    What changed?

    Example 2

    CASUAL

    "You can't really trust everything you read online."

    ACADEMIC

    "Digital information sources require critical evaluation for credibility and accuracy."

    What changed?

    Practice Transformations

    Transform this sentence:

    "Kids nowadays are always on their phones and it's making them antisocial."

    Your academic version:

    Transform this sentence:

    "I think the government should totally do something about climate change because it's getting really bad."

    Your academic version:

    Transform this sentence:

    "Shakespeare's plays are still cool because they talk about stuff we deal with today."

    Your academic version:

    Tone Transformation Cheat Sheet

    a lot of →numerous, many, significant
    thing →factor, element, aspect
    get →obtain, acquire, receive
    kids →children, adolescents
    bad →negative, adverse, detrimental
    good →beneficial, effective
    I think →Evidence suggests
    really/very →[remove or be specific]
    stuff →concepts, elements, factors
    you →one, individuals, [specific]

    Student Handout: Sentence Variety Exercises

    Sentence Variety Exercises

    Practice combining and varying sentences to create more engaging, flowing prose.

    Part A: Identify the Problem

    Read this paragraph. What's wrong with it?

    "The study examined social media use. The study included 500 participants. The participants were college students. The students used Instagram daily. The results showed increased anxiety. The anxiety was related to comparison behaviors."
    Problem identified

    Part B: Combine for Flow

    Rewrite the paragraph above using varied sentence structures:

    Part C: Sentence Combining Practice

    Combine each set of short sentences into ONE effective sentence:

    Set 1:

    "The experiment lasted three months. The experiment was conducted at Harvard. The experiment tested memory retention."

    Your combined sentence:

    Set 2:

    "Climate change affects coastal cities. Rising sea levels cause flooding. Infrastructure is at risk."

    Your combined sentence:

    Set 3:

    "The author uses symbolism. The symbolism appears throughout the novel. The symbols represent freedom."

    Your combined sentence:

    Part D: Sentence Openers Variety

    Revise each sentence to begin differently than "The":

    Original: "The researchers discovered a significant correlation."

    Revision

    Original: "The data suggests a need for further study."

    Revision

    Original: "The author argues that technology has transformed education."

    Revision

    Sentence Variety Toolkit

    Ways to open sentences:

    • Prepositional phrase: "In this study,..."
    • Participial phrase: "Examining the data,..."
    • Adverb: "Significantly,..."
    • Transitional word: "However,..."
    • Dependent clause: "Although research is limited,..."
    • Inverted structure: "Rarely do researchers find..."

    Real Examples: Strong vs. Weak

    Error Correction Example

    Weak (Multiple Errors)

    "The study results was very significant, they showed that students who use there phones alot have worst grades then students who don't."

    Strong (Corrected)

    "The study results were significant, demonstrating that students who frequently use their phones tend to have lower grades than those with limited phone use."

    Corrections: subject-verb agreement (was→were), comma splice fixed, homophones (there→their), spelling (alot→frequently), word choice (worst→lower, then→than).

    Academic Tone Example

    Weak (Casual)

    "Basically, Shakespeare's plays are still popular because people can totally relate to the characters and their problems."

    Strong (Academic)

    "Shakespeare's enduring popularity can be attributed to the universal themes embedded in his works, which continue to resonate with contemporary audiences."

    Sentence Variety Example

    Weak (Choppy)

    "The experiment was important. It tested memory. The participants were students. They were given tasks. The tasks measured recall. The results were significant."

    Strong (Varied)

    "This important experiment tested memory among student participants who completed recall-measurement tasks, yielding significant results."

    Common Student Mistakes & Interventions

    Fixing Everything at Once

    Students try to correct all errors in one read-through, missing many.

    Intervention: "Professional editors do multiple passes. First structure, then style, then proofreading. You'll catch more this way."

    Over-Reliance on Grammar Tools

    Students accept all suggestions without critical evaluation.

    Intervention: "Grammar checkers are advisors, not authorities. Ask yourself: 'Does this change improve MY meaning?'"

    Removing All Personality

    Students think academic = robotic and strip away all voice.

    Intervention: "Academic writing has voice too. Your unique analysis and word choices can still shine through formal language."

    Ignoring Reading Aloud

    Students skip this step despite instructions, missing rhythm issues.

    Intervention: "Your ear catches what your eye misses. If you stumble while reading, your reader will stumble too."

    Same Sentence Starters

    Students begin every sentence with "The" or "This," creating monotony.

    Intervention: "Circle your first three words of each sentence. Do you see a pattern? Variety creates rhythm."

    Differentiation Strategies

    Scaffolded Support

    Emerging Writers

    Students who need foundational grammar support

    • Focus on 2-3 error types only (e.g., run-ons and fragments)
    • Provide simplified checklist with 8 items maximum
    • Use color-coded examples (green = correct, red = error)
    • Pair with stronger writer for editing activities
    • Offer sentence frames for academic tone practice
    Standard

    Developing Writers

    Students working at grade-level expectations

    • Complete all four activities as designed
    • Use full self-editing checklist
    • Independent error hunt with partner check
    • Apply tone transformation to own writing
    Advanced Extension

    Proficient Writers

    Students ready for style-level challenges

    • Create error passages for classmates to correct
    • Analyze published authors' stylistic grammar choices
    • Lead peer editing groups
    • Develop personal style guide based on mentor texts
    • Explore rhetorical grammar (breaking rules purposefully)
    ELL Accommodations

    English Language Learners

    Students developing English proficiency

    • Provide L1/English grammar comparison charts
    • Use visual sentence diagrams for structure
    • Offer extended examples with annotations
    • Focus on patterns that differ from home language
    • Allow dictionary/translator access during activities

    Time Adaptations

    30-40 min

    Quick Version

    • • Focus on ONE skill: self-editing OR tone transformation
    • • Use abbreviated Error Hunt with 5 errors
    • • Skip sentence variety exercises
    70-85 min

    Standard

    • • Complete all four activities as designed
    • • Full handouts with all practice sections
    • • Partner work for peer feedback
    2 periods

    Extended

    • • Add personal error portfolio tracking
    • • Include writing conference simulations
    • • Create error passages for classmates

    Assessment Rubric

    CriteriaDeveloping (1)Proficient (2)Mastery (3)
    Error IdentificationFinds obvious errors onlyIdentifies most grammar/usage errorsCatches subtle errors including style issues
    Self-Editing ProcessSkips steps or rushes throughFollows checklist systematicallyAdapts process to personal error patterns
    Academic ToneInformal language persistsMaintains formal registerBalances formality with engaging voice
    Sentence VarietyChoppy or repetitive structuresSome variation in length/structureRhythmic, purposeful variety throughout
    Tool UsageAccepts all suggestions blindlyEvaluates suggestions thoughtfullyUses tools to learn patterns, not just fix errors

    Extension Activities

    Personal Error Portfolio

    Students track their three most common error types across multiple assignments, creating a personalized "watch list" with examples and corrections.

    Implementation:

    • Provide portfolio template or folder
    • After each writing assignment, add examples
    • Track improvement over time
    • Set personal goals for error reduction

    Editing Simulation

    Students role-play as professional editors, receiving "client" drafts to edit with tracked changes and explanation comments.

    Implementation:

    • Assign "editor" and "author" roles
    • Editors use track changes to mark edits
    • Add comments explaining each change
    • Hold "revision conference" to discuss

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